(Closed) Any thoughts on this intro for our wedding website?

posted 6 years ago in Technology
Post # 3
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: March 2013

I think the content is great!  I might add something like:

We’re so excited for you to be joining us!

Something that welcomes the guests…it’s your guests going to the site so the intro is sort a “Welcome Page” to them.  So you want to include them in the intro.

I’d personally change a little bit of the wording and grammar on what you wrote, but I’ll only suggest it if you’re interested 🙂 I don’t want to pick anything apart.

This is what we wrote, but it’s also still a draft so I’m open to suggestions (all the underlines are links to other tabs in the site)!

We are so excited to share our special day with you!  We hope that this website provide you with all the information you need as you make plans to attend our wedding.  If any of your questions remain unanswered,  please contact us!  We’re sure that other people have the same questions so we’d love to include the information.

On this site you’ll find our love story including how we met and, more importantly, how Dave proposed!  You’ll also find ceremony and reception details including addresses and directions.  You can also RSVP and let us know that you’re coming!  

Already hoping that we’ll play your favourite dancing tune at the wedding?  Request your song and you won’t be disappointed!

Post # 6
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: March 2013

Yup no problem! 

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