(Closed) Anyone Want to Check Out My Ceremony Script and Give Suggestions?

posted 4 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 4
Member
576 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2015

@ohmybears48:  Overall, I really like it! Without knowing the pace, it’s hard to tell how long it will take – I think you’ll just need to practice to find out if you’re hitting about 20 minutes. Since you wanted honest opinions, I’ll mention that I wish you had left out some of the most “casual bits” (food poisoning, meeting at a “random sports bar”) – those pieces seemed to detract from the beauty of the ceremony, for me. Also, if some members of your crowd are not very religious, the prayer/reading might make them a bit uncomfortable. Other than those possible things, you’re great. And I loved the handfasting!

 

Post # 5
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3033 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

@ohmybears48:  My only contribution: are you certain “presider” is a word? I realize it can be found in Merriam Webster online, but I think it could be one of those words like “normalcy” or “conversate” that only exists because of people’s incessant mispronunciation of another word.

 

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