(Closed) Can you please help a bee out??

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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12833 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I think you need to list the dates differently.. i.e., it’s either “RSVP by August 15th” or “RSVP by August 15, 2012.”

As for some serious constructive criticism…  I don’t want to sound like a jerk, but it looks like something I could make myself pretty easily. 

Post # 5
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12833 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

@Keylime Pie:  I saw you wrote that.  But, since you only posted one, that’s all I had to give you the feedback you asked for…

Post # 7
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53 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

I think a lot of brides like to see how the set coordinates (e.g. envelope, response card, invite, etc.) and want to see it printed out. I’ve seen many bueatiful invites on the boards, some simple, some with intricate details, and some playful. It your really interested in getting feedback, I’d post a picture of the coordinated suite.

Otherwise, try checking out some books that decrbe basic graphical design principles to get a better sense on ow to use font size, layout, font types, etc, to create a more intrinsic, visual hierarchy for the invitation wording that emphasizes the most important messages and de-emphasizes details. Unfortunately, the uniform font and layout combined with the playful colors giveit the invite a parochial look rather than sophisticated fun.

Good luck!

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