(Closed) Can you proof read this for me?

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

Looks good to me!

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

Together with their families and with joyous hearts
Bride Name

&

Groom Name
Invite you to share in celebrating their wedding

Sunday, the fifth of September
two thousand and ten
at half past three in the afternoon

First Baptist Church
303 South Edgewood Road
Mount Vernon, Ohio

Dinner and merriment to follow

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2011

If you’re having a very formal wedding, then I believe that every line is capitalized. I would also capitalized the “fifth” to make everything uniform. Other than that, everything looks great! 

Post # 8
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

You don’t need to have ‘at’ before the time. If you like it though then of course keep it Wink

Half after three in the afternoon

Post # 10
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

two thousand AND ten

Post # 12
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

ahh I didn’t know that…when I was making up mock-invites I came across that issue, googled away and it seemed like using the “and” was the way to go.

Ok, sorry! 🙂

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