can you proofread for me please?

posted 3 years ago in DIY
Post # 2
1230 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2015

If you have the british spelling of honour, then do so with favour and favourite. That’s the only discrepency that I can see. 

Post # 3
1298 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

Depending on your spacing on the invitation, I would put ‘three o’clock’ on a separate line below the date, because that line looks much longer than the rest of it. I have seen some invitations that put the year on a separate line, too. 

I would delete all the periods at the end of the lines. 


  • This reply was modified 2 years, 8 months ago by  emstar168.
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