Ceremony Insert Help?

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
220 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2014

I think this is a great start!

A few mistakes:

in “Structure’s Name” by Creator’s Name  the by should have a lowercase b

The first part of Please take into consideration should be two sentences: Location’s Name is an outdoor museum. Please be considerate of others and the grounds.

A few suggestions:

Make the word Ceremony bigger and/or bolder so it stands out more.

All of the plain text looks a bit boring.  I would use your script font for your and FI’s name and the structure’s name.  Maybe also the words: Please take into consideration.

The “Please be considerate of others and the grounds” might come off rude to some people. I understand what you are getting at (my venue also has a lot of rules about guest behavior).  Maybe you could be more specific about things they will have to do to be considerate that may be out of the norm (like the no smoking part).  That way it will come across as you giving them a heads up rather than you being a parent figure telling them to behave.

Make the location part bigger so that the name and address take up that whole white space.


Good luck!

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