Ceremony script (non-traditional) – feedback?

posted 3 years ago in Ceremony
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  • Post # 5
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: October 2013

    I’m working on this too! I like everything, and even have part of it in my ceremony too! I love that part about BEING the right partner. So beautiful.


    The only thing I would change is to take out the part where you swear this is no impediment to being married. It seems kind of useless since if there was, you wouldn’t be standing up there. The rest of it is beautifu, short and sweet. 🙂

    Post # 6
    426 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: September 2012

    For some reason I feel like the second paragraph is too repetitive for me.  I think guests need to only be welcomed once, so I would combine the ideas from the first and second paragraph into one.  Other than that I really like it.


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