Charity Registry – need help with wording

posted 3 years ago in Gifts and Registries
  • poll: Does this language look good?
    Yes! You are good to go! : (0 votes)
    I'm suggesting some edits in the comments. : (1 votes)
    25 %
    OMG I LOOKED THEM UP AND I WANT TO ADOPT ALL THE PUPPIES AND KITTIES!!! : (3 votes)
    75 %
  • Post # 3
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    3199 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: October 2013

    @TrousseauHorse:  grammar-wise, i’m confused by this:

     As you may know, we adopted both of our beloved cats, Chloe and Deputy Marshall  Raylan Kittens (or “Little Kitty” and “Fatty” as they are known around the  house.)

    Did you mean “as kittens” instead of “Kittens”? Or is that part of the cat’s name? Haha

    Other than that I think it looks great 🙂

    Post # 5
    Member
    10495 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: January 2011

    I would change your auto response, you don’t know if everyone will attend.

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