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posted 3 years ago in Paper
  • poll: What do you think?
    Love it : (2 votes)
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  • Post # 3
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    895 posts
    Busy bee

    It’s a good start, I suggest choosing less fonts – only stick to 2 or 3. And play more with the font size, right now there’s no focus. You could choose “save the date” as the focus or your names or the date, but I would choose one. And make the note about the hotels much smaller

     

    Less !!!! – one does the trick.

     

    Also I would maybe add boxes and lines to split things up and add visual interest

     

    Post # 6
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    Busy bee

    @MsGinkgo:  I just did mine last week, it took me forever to settle on one! Don’t give up!

    also don’t restrain yourself in portrait, try it landscape too!

    Post # 8
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    7531 posts
    Bumble Beekeeper

    @MsGinkgo:  Much better!  Just my opinion– make “Save the date” a bit larger, and the actual date a bit smaller. Center (move up) “A block of rooms. . .”

    Post # 9
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    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: August 2013

    @mrsztobee:  +100

     @MsGinkgo:  Still seems like there are too many typefaces – just looks a little confused, somehow?  I think the fonts don’t necessarily go well with each other?  Or maybe there are too many different sizes of letter going on?

    Post # 10
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    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: July 2014

    @mrsztobee:  +1.

    If you don’t limit it to 2-3 fonts it really is too busy to read And it looks jumbled, doesnt give it the fun look im guessing you want. If you want to vary it, then have 2 different text colors (purple & black or grey)in addition to 2 fonts Or so.

    It might also be nice to have some text justified instead of centered (hotel info). And I also think one or 2 items of text being white in a purple or grey box would help to break it up. 

    Post # 13
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    3249 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: August 2013

    @MsGinkgo:  Typo in “Invitation”

    Post # 14
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    1762 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: October 2014

    Correct the spelling of version three and it’s perfect!

    Post # 15
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    839 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: August 2014

    @MsGinkgo:  typo in “reference” as well.

    I have to be honest, the extra exclamation points irk me. I’d use just one per sentence. 

    Post # 16
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    895 posts
    Busy bee

    try put your names on one line, and making a larger & sign so that the names overlap. i think it needs some negative space to give your eye a break

     

     

     

    i know that makes no sense…. heres one of my drafts….

     

     

     

     

     

     

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