Critique my DIY Canvas Contract/Guestbook Alternative

posted 3 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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1248 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@JJBelle:  Looks good! Sorry I didn’t see your post earlier, so I hope this is in time. The only thing that I would change (due to personal preference) is the wording in the last paragraph to:

“We, the family and friends of Jeannie and Ryan, witness…”

But, again, that is just a wording preference on my part.  

Lovely idea and a great guest book alternative!

Post # 4
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715 posts
Busy bee

@JJBelle:  I agree with @wabanzi:  I prefer the wording  she suggested. If you want to leave it as is wouldn’t you say “Jeannie’s and Ryan’s”… (instead of Jeannie and Ryan’s… ) I am not a native speaker though. 

Post # 6
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1248 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@JJBelle:  post a pic when you get it.  It is such a nice idea, I’m anxious to see it.

 

i had a feeling I posted too late, but it reads well as is.

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