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Critique my STDs! (Part 2, update!!)

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    Nlmiele    July 3, 2010   Pa

    I took your suggestions, we made it better. It's still not right, but we're defintely on our way!

    Thanks, hive.

    What do you think now? I told the designer to make our names bigger and put "formal invite to follow" at the very bottom.

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    Nlmiele    July 3, 2010   Pa

    I forgot to black out our names. Nice. haha.

    Well, here's the original to compare to!!

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    wedding710    Summer 2010   Chicago

    Love the revised one! Very pretty!

     
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    cinemaparadiso    July 16, 2015  

    Ooh, I hate to say it... but i liked the date at the top! Maybe just if it were bolder?

    Otherwise, Love it! I think its very nice!

     
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    cinemaparadiso    July 16, 2015  

    Oh, and just from a design standpoint... the graphic behind "Save The Date" is not centered. (Sorry if that was too nitpicky!)

     
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    Chachacha    June 2010   Minneapolis, MN

    I really like them! I think they look great!

     
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    Nlmiele    July 3, 2010   Pa

    Omg I didn't even notice that.

    THANK YOU.

    I'm gonna have her bring the graphic down cause it's all squished right now, but if it still looks naked, maybe we could move the "Save the date" and "for the wedding of" and then put our names on the black bar.

     
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    cinemaparadiso    July 16, 2015  

    Aw I think your names on the black bar would be so much better! because, you know, you're the focal point of this anyways :)

     
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    I think it looks great. The only thing I would say is maybe try putting your names in the script font and the "formal invite" part in print instead

     
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    Nlmiele    July 3, 2010   Pa

    The NEW design! I think this one is a keeper! But I'm still open to suggestions :D

     

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    Nlmiele    July 3, 2010   Pa

    I like it alot better now!! Someone please tell me the same thing :D hahaha

     
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    cinemaparadiso    July 16, 2015  

    I love it!

     
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    july112010    July 11, 2010   los angeles

    I think the new one looks great!

     
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    Lillindy    September 2008   Bay Area, CA

    LOVE LOVE LOVE it!  Beautiful!

     
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    snake    September 18, 2010   richmond va

    I have to agree with cinemaparadiso -- i prefer it with the date at the top, however its really beautiful!

     
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    jingle96    May 28, 2010   DW in ARUBA/livin' in VA

    Very pretty!

     
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    KatieBug3017    May 30, 2010   Clearwater, FL

    Very very very pretty! I like it...classsssy! :)

     
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    magdiela    March 28, 2010   Pasadena, CA

    I also like the date on top, but they are really pretty!

     
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    MissAsB    June 6, 2009   Married in CO, Living in AL

    I really like the final design.  I like that your names are a different font so they stand out more.

     
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    eryepye    March 27, 2010   Seattle, married in Portland

    oh!  The revised design looks GREAT!

     
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    AnnieAAA    October 25, 2009   Dallas, TX

    Looks great! I love when the couples name is a different font, so pretty!

     
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    whitesonnet    June 26, 2010   Detroit, MI

    I love the right aligned text. I'm doing that style on my invites too!

     

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