Critique our DIY Invitations!

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 2
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

OMW these are amazing! My absolute FAVORITE part is how you did the typography for the date and time. I’m a little envious… in the middle of printing myself. Haha–I still like mine, but yours are really awesome!

The only *possible* thing that could be changed (and it might just be the quality), but should there be a comma between Edmonton, Alberta? It could be that you changed the location, though!

Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2014

Looks great!  Your names don’t look centered to me but that would be my only comment.  I’m designing my own too and I’m ridiculously picky with them lol.

Post # 4
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: April 2013

Yellowhead Brewery looks slightly elevated in relation to Edmonton, Alberta.  Other than that I think it looks great.

Post # 6
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: May 2014

Those are really cute!  My lil girl is a Natalie:-)!

Post # 7
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

I think they look super super cute! And I love the poem on the back – it’s perfect! The only minor things I might consider would be making your last names the same font as your first names (but keeping them smaller) and I’m not a huge fan of the uppercase “S” in the first line of the poem on the back. But neither of these is a big deal.

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

MissLibra:  so cute! the only thing i would change it the font of your last names. i kept drawing my eye back to it because i feel like it sticks out in a weird/bad way. i feel like the rest of the invitation is a little casual/relaxed/eclectic while the font for your last names looks super straight-laced corporate.

they’re fabu otherwise though, well done!

Post # 10
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

I love them. I think they’re fantastic.

Maybe move the stevenson over to the left slightly? I think it could play off the big M a little better if it was over a little more.

Just felt like I had to add something! Great job

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

I agree about the last name font. It seems out of place on the invitation (yes, I know it’s used for the date/time also)… there’s just something off about it.

Post # 12
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Busy bee

MissLibra:  

Very cute! I love the back. So appropriate.

The font of the & sign with the N is a little jumbly- but if your real name doesn’t start with an N it shouldn’t be an issue.

I agree that Groomslast should be centered under Groomsfirst.

Other than that it looks really good.

Post # 13
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260 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: January 2014

Very fitting for the brewery! So cute!

Post # 14
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Busy bee

I like the simplicity of them. Simple but not boring. Well done!

Post # 15
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: March 2014

These are so cute.

The only thing I would say is the last names don’t look centered with the first names. 

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