Critique our Invitation Suite please!

posted 3 years ago in Paper
  • poll: What do you think?
    I like #1 : (19 votes)
    50 %
    I like #2 : (12 votes)
    32 %
    they're really not good : (3 votes)
    8 %
    good start - I have a suggestion : (4 votes)
    11 %
  • Post # 3
    Member
    62 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: October 2014

    @AlmostMrsPeck:  I actually love both! my only way to choose which I prefer more is to ask what type of event you’re having (ie. formal, semi-formal, black tie vs. laid back). I prefer number 1 if you’re going for a more formal feel just because I think the emblem is very sophisticated and clean. But I like 2 better for a more whimsical and romantic feel.

    or perhaps i’m reading way too much into it lol.

    Post # 4
    Hostess
    8680 posts
    Bumble Beekeeper
    • Wedding: October 2014

    I really like number 2.. but something is off with that branch.. it looks really pixelated..

    Post # 7
    Member
    14 posts
    Newbee
    • Wedding: July 2014

    I like them both, but probably the first one best.  I love how both your last names start with “P” so the P goes with both!  One suggestion for your consideration:  I think it might read better if you said “their” marriage as opposed to “our” marriage, just because you are switching from third person to first person.  Also, I think everyone will understand this, but technically, you have “child” as an entree choice. 🙂

    Your venue looks AMAZING!

    Post # 9
    Member
    2124 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    @AlmostMrsPeck:  Cool venue 🙂 I really like invitation suite #2 but I think you could do better. 

    Post # 11
    Member
    889 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: July 2014

    @AlmostMrsPeck:  I really like #3 😉 

    however i’d move the 3rd line (sat, May 17) to the next paragraph as right now it tears the date apart which doesnt seem to make sense to me?!

    Post # 14
    Member
    2831 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: September 2014

    the branches are so pixelated. i’d still go with the first design. it looks fantastic!

    Post # 15
    Member
    346 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: November 1999

    I wouldn’t use anything with the branches as they are all pixelated. I don’t think you have them at a high enough resolution thus making them blurry. I also wouldn’t use that scripty font at the bottom for the venue name because it’s a bit hard to read in that color/size.

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