Post # 1
I made these signature drink frames for my wedding and my good friend and bridesmaid created the poem but im not sure if “love affair” sounds ok? What do you think?
Note: I removed the girls name for privacy reasons.
Post # 3
i think it is very cute! i don’t think love affair is bad at all! 🙂
Post # 4
I think it sounds great. I love the sign!
Post # 5
@Lepidoptera: mmm…the whole poem doesn’t really scan or flow properly. But none of you are professionals so I don’t think anyone will mind.
Post # 6
It sounds temporary to me. Since you mentioned it, I personally wouldn’t use it at my wedding. But I doubt anyone will notice. To make the poem flow better, change “That is” to “That’s”. And mojitos should be plural. Maybe “Strawberry Mojitos are the special tonight?”
Post # 8
@kgirl91: Good Suggestions.