(Closed) Does this invitation wording sound ok?

posted 10 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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43 posts
Newbee
  • Wedding: July 2006

What if you rearrange it a little, something like this –

Together with their parents

Miss Bees Knees and

Mr. Bees Knees

request the pleasure of your company

to celebrate their marriage

 

It’s really nice that you want to add your parents to the invitation.

Post # 4
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55 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: July 2018

Stick with the same wording throughout:

ie.  Together with their parents, Miss Bees Knees and Mr. Bees Knees request the pleasure of your company…

or

The pleasure of your company is requested to celebrate the marriage of Miss…. 

Post # 5
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385 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: April 2008

I worded mine in first person versus third person because we are the ones doing the inviting— so if you were to do it that way it would be  

Together with our parents

Miss Beesknees and Mr Beesknees

request the pleasure of your company

to celebrate joining together in marriage…  (or something like that)

 

Post # 7
Member
33 posts
Newbee

We had a similar issue – we’re paying a majority, but we’re getting a little help from each set of parents.  Ours reads:

My parents

and

his parents

request the pleasure of your company at the marriage of their children

My name

and

His name

 

Good luck! 

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