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posted 2 years ago in Paper
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  • Post # 4
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    247 posts
    Helper bee

    These are GORGEOUS. You did a super awesome job! Honestly have never seen a cuter program! I love all the little jokes thrown in! Bribery for the flower girls to enter? Hilarious. And it looks super professional.

    Honestly if I were to nitpick to try to find SOMETHING to change I’d capitalize the S in “sorry guys!” about the bridal texts and put a comma after “cake” on the flipside under the reception description. Even though I know having a comma there is no longer grammatically required. I just prefer it that way.

    But if you don’t then totally cool! I think it’s awesome as is!

    🙂

    Post # 5
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    41 posts
    Newbee

    Under wedding planning, 1 suits tried on, instead of 1 suit tried on

    also under the same section, why are only some of the words highlighted/colored (dsn’t look bad, but just off a little)

    example: 6 cakes tasted, only “6 cak” has background color

     

    looks good tho!

    Post # 6
    Member
    318 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: November 2014

    I got similar ones made on etsy by B is for brown. They are totally fun way of jazzing up a program 🙂 looks great!

    • This reply was modified 2 years, 4 months ago by  znowbird22.
    Post # 7
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    611 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: March 1988

    PORTRAIT… not portait (in the wedding favor bubble)

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