Feedback on our invitations please :)

posted 3 years ago in Paper
  • poll: What image to use on the bottom of the invite
    Heart : (17 votes)
    32 %
    Flowers : (35 votes)
    66 %
    Other (please comment your suggestions) : (1 votes)
    2 %
  • Post # 2
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: August 2015

    I like the flowers better. They add just enough detail to make them simple, classy and interesting.

    Both look great though! I would consider shrinking down “Holly and Nick” to fully fit on the page. To me it seems a bit strange that the words are falling off the sides. 

    Post # 3
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: April 2014

    I like the second one best! Very pretty

    Post # 4
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: September 2015

    NickysGirl14:  they both pretty but I love the flower better

    Post # 5
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    72 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: June 2014

    It’s awesome! (I prefer the flowers!) My only two critiques would be:

    1. The type on “Holly and Nick” feels kind of abruptly cut off on the sides. Not that I don’t like it going off the sides of the page, but if you do choose to do that, I’d increase the size a bit so you can’t see where the edges of the H lines curl back around (and also bump it down a little so you see the full loop on the L’s). Otherwise shrinking the text to fit it all inside will look great too!

    2. I would increase the leading (the space between the lines) in the body text, and decrease the font size a very little bit to accomodate that space. Might make it a little easier to read, as well as keep your “Holly and Nick” text from being overshadowed!

    Otherwise it looks great! And honestly, I’m just being super nitpicky (I’m a graphic designer, can’t help but notice the small things)- at this point you could send it out as-is and I’m sure everyone would still love it!

    Post # 6
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    636 posts
    Busy bee

    I agree with PP about the cutoff of your names, and make sure you shrink it enough to leave room for bleed (the edges that they will cut off in the printshop – I think it’s about 1-2 milimeters). Otherwise looks great, awesome job!

    Post # 7
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: May 2014

    NickysGirl14:  I like the flower.  I’d make the “Holly and Nick” part at the top a color rather than white.  Maybe one of the lighter colors in the flowers.  Otherwise, you have color at the bottom and almost no where else, so it looks unbalanced.

    I also agree with PP’s comment about the text going off the page.  I think you either need to make the text larger to make it look more intentional, or shrink it to fit.

    Post # 8
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    Newbee
    • Wedding: June 2015 - Beach

    Both are very pretty and I love the format! Flower is a little bit more colorful =)

    Post # 9
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    Honey bee
    • Wedding: May 2014

    NickysGirl14:  Hmmmm…. it’s a tough one because I think they’re both pretty! But I’d probably go with the flowers. And I think you shouldn’t have blocked anything on it so we could all show up for the reception!  Lol!

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