Final Proof of invites! Help :)

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

They look great!!  One little thing is in the “Where is Kleinburg” after Toronto and before so there is what looks like a parenthesis.  Mistake?  Or did the other parenthesis get left out?

 

That’s all I saw, and I proofread everything as I read all the time!  Bravo!!

Post # 4
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Honey bee

Looks great, but I would suggest whiting out your names and locations (or creating fake ones) if you haven’t already.

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: April 2014

@AlmostMrsPeck:  Looks great! Just a few things – you haven’t closed the brackets (parentheses) in the Kleinburg section. And I personally prefer/see more often ‘Together with their parents’ rather than ‘Along with their parents’ but that’s your call. 🙂

Post # 7
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@AlmostMrsPeck:   The “Along” with their parents is off – seems the A and the L are transposed? 

Post # 8
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

Yes, that A and L got goofy!  Weird!  As for the after Toronto, I would use a comma there, but brackets or parenthesis are okay too.

 

I also suggest that you fix and fidget with what you want to change, then step away from it for awhile again so you can see it with fresh eyes one last time.  You’ll be glad you did.  If you want to post a final copy one more time, I bet you’ll get thumbs up from all.

Looking awesome though!!

Post # 9
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

Everything is pretty, but I’d personally clean up your prose and remove all the extra commas on the info page.

Post # 11
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

@AlmostMrsPeck:  And the first two are completely unnecessary.

Post # 12
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2012

“restrictions” is spelled wrong.

This is purely a nit picky graphic design thing, but generally you don’t want one word on a line by itself (ex. “hotel” and “ceremony”).

In the “ceremony and reception” I can’t tell if there’s one or two spaces after the period. It should be only one.

Post # 14
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2014 - Ontario, Canada ♥ EDD- April 2016

I don’t have any suggestions other than what’s already been said, but just wanted to say that I love staying at the Delta Meadowvale (: The water slide is great!

Post # 15
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: May 2014

cute

Post # 16
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@AlmostMrsPeck:  I think you should capitalize the first word of each sentence on the Information sheet to be consistent. So in the bottom section, Visit, There, and You.

It’s hard to tell without the names, but it looks to me like the swirly part of your fiance’s name (in the Invite) is too close to “happily.”

I agree with @Westwood; there shouldn’t be just one word on a line! You could rephrase your sentences slightly to make this work. “The hotel will provide transportion to and from the ceremony & reception” should be shorter, etc.

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