(Closed) First draft of my Vows! – Critique?

posted 6 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Sounds beautiful!  

Post # 4
331 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

They sound beautiful : ) Congratulations.

Post # 5
47 posts
  • Wedding: May 2014

Sounds perfect! 🙂


Post # 6
32 posts
  • Wedding: March 2013

Awwww! I teared up! I think it’s pretty perfect and really heartfelt

Post # 7
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

Aww! So sweet! I teared up! I love the part …. I promise to still love you even when I don’t like you…. I think it’s perfect!

Post # 8
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

Lovely.  Two minor details: change by to my and compliment to complement.  

You have become by best friend over the last few years. I can’t imagine living my life without you anymore. You are my true other half, and we compliment each other in ways I didn’t think was possible. You have taught me how to be a better person. You keep me grounded, focused on what matters, but at the same time you always know how to make me laugh and keep things lighthearted. Most days you know better than I do what I need.

Post # 9
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2014

I feel like a peeping tom reading your vows.. hahhaa sorry – but I just feel like I’m invading your privacy by reading them!  This part made me tear up:  Most days you know better than I do what I need. Man, I’m a sucker for weddings..

EDIT:  Oh and of course, if they made me tear up, I loved them!

Post # 10
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

They sound great very heartfelt and to the point. 

Post # 11
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Post # 14
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

wow these just made me cry…:) they sound great!



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