(Closed) Help me with grammar/wording

posted 5 years ago in Paper
  • poll: which one?
    at : (2 votes)
    33 %
    in : (2 votes)
    33 %
    other please explain : (2 votes)
    33 %
  • Post # 3
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    4722 posts
    Honey bee

    At sounds better to me. In sounds like you want them in the bridal party. 

    Post # 4
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    837 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: October 2012

    Generally, phrases that include a preposition keep their preposition, even if split from the rest of the phrase. So “invite you to share in and celebrate at their wedding. But I agree that it sounds weird that way. What about shifting it around a bit? 

    So and so invite you to share in their joy and come celebrate at their wedding, or something along those lines. 

    Post # 6
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    672 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: October 2012

    So and so invite you to share and celebrate at their wedding. If you don’t want to change the wording, but if you do I agree with pp @ellisrobertson: .

    I would add a poll so people can vote on the two wordings. 

    Post # 7
    Bee
    13686 posts
    Honey Beekeeper
    • Wedding: September 2009 - Barr Mansion

    What about “So and so invite you to share in and celebrate their wedding”?

    Post # 8
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    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: April 2012

    “so and so invite you to share in the celebration of their wedding”

    “so and so invite you to share and celebrate their wedding”

     

    Post # 9
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: June 2012

    The poster above me has the best wording — “share in the celebration of their wedding”

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