HELP ME WITH MY VOWS PLEASE

posted 3 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
Member
313 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: December 2013

Ok for this part:

 

i will always be faithful and love you for exactly who you are for all of eternity. I love you for everything that you are and everything you have been for me. 

 

I understand that these are not the same but they sound repetative.

 

The last quote, I don’t like and I wanted to mention it because when I was reading the whole thing, it gave me chills, and then the last part, it almost didn’t fit, it messed up your wonderful rhythm.

 

But goosebumps, really!

 

Nicely done!

 

 

Post # 4
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778 posts
Busy bee

My world, my everything begins and ends with you.Your heart, mind and strength inspire me to be the best person i can be. 

Whatever lies behind us and whatever lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

For the rest of our lives, i will trust and respect you, i will always be honest, caring and truthful. I promise to help create a life we can cherish and to support you through good times and bad. i vow to grow old by your side as your love and best friend. i will always be faithful and love you for exactly who you are for all of eternity. I love you for everything that you are and everything you have been for me. 

I like the quote. I would just rearange it a little. I think it acts as a great segway from what you are declaring about your relationship to what you are then promising your husband. I think it works well from switching between ‘I’ and then ‘Our’.
 
I think they are beautiful. Clear and heartfelt.
 

Post # 6
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1367 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I don’t think you need to do much.

To address the repetition brideanjeza mentions, you could say something like “I love you for everything you are, all that you’ve been for me (and the things we’ll do together.”)

Last part in brackets since it might not fit in.

So with the suggestions that justjade made it could be something like this

My world, my everything begins and ends with you.Your heart, mind and strength inspire me to be the best person i can be. 

Whatever lies behind us and whatever lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

For the rest of our lives, i will trust and respect you, i will always be honest, caring and truthful. I promise to help create a life we can cherish and to support you through good times and bad. i vow to grow old by your side as your love and best friend. i will always be faithful and love you for exactly who you are for all of eternity. I love you for everything that you are, all you have been for me and the things that we’ll do together.

 

Post # 9
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1036 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

@shootznladrz89:  Love love your final version!

I might be nice to add his/her name in there as well. There is something beautiful and powerful about a name. 🙂

 

“My world, my everything begins and ends with you.Your heart, mind and strength inspire me to be the best person i can be.

Whatever lies behind us and whatever lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

[Full Name], For the rest of our lives, i will trust and respect you, i will always be honest, caring and truthful. I promise to help create a life we can cherish and to support you through good times and bad. i vow to grow old by your side as your love and best friend. i will always be faithful and love you for exactly who you are for all of eternity.”

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