HELP!! Need phrasing for invite help – RIGHT NOW before sale ends!!

posted 3 years ago in Etiquette
Post # 4
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

Do not change it. “Invite you to join us in the celebration of their daughter”…

NO.

Either “invite you to join us in the celebration of the wedding our daughter”

OR

“invite you to join them in the celebrating the wedding of their daughter”

Anyway, I don’t think the wording makes it sound any less like a wedding, but don’t use “us” and then “their”.

Post # 8
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760 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014 - Gold Hill Gardens

You don’t need to include your last name if it’s the same as your parents.

Post # 10
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2164 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

I would include FI’s middle name too, if he has one.

Post # 11
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2164 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

Not bad at all! Yaaay!

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