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I looked at every page. Overall it looks great! Personally it felt as though there were so many pictures per page that it was a bit distracting though. You had SO MANY great photos, but you probably could cut back a bit and still be able to tell the story of your day. It's your album though, and if you would be sad to cut any of the pictures just leave them. It's a great record of your wedding, and it looks like it was a great time!

I'm trying to be critical here because you asked, but if you disagree then just ignore my comment!

Do you really need the Timmies shot and two different photos of the back of your dress being done up on your getting ready pages? I'd rather see the 4th photo on the 3rd page bigger, the one with your BMs and their drinks.

I like the photo on pg 5, but the rest of them on the next page all seem excessive. All similar angles, upshots, and they don't show the text on your hanger or details of your dress any more clearly. The top right hand corner of pg 6 is just not a very good shot, all blown out, but I like that it shows the skirt a bit more.

Pg 9, the order of the top 2 shots don't work for me. I do storyboarding for films and things, the information doesn't read right the way it's presented, I didn't know what I was looking at right away. I would switch the photos so that your shot was before his. I would also flip your photo horizontally so that it looked like you were going towards him and coming up from behind.

I like the top left hand shot on pg 10 more than the one on the bottom right of pg 9, I would remove it and replace it with the one from pg 10. His expression doesn't change on those bottom two shots and the pg 10 one looks warmer and more natural. Love the other shots on pg 10, but not so much the thumbs up one.

Pg 11, why so miserable in that first shot? The B&W looks out of place, if you have it in colour I would use it in colour.

Pg 12, like the first mustache one, not so much the second. LOVE the laughing one.

Pg 13-14, great, leave as is.

Pg 16, wish I'd seen this one first, before seeing them on your bridal party. I would get rid of both of the mustache shots on pg 12 and put the laughing one after this shot. Maybe give the laughing mustache shot with your bridal party and the mustache shot with your DH and his party each a half page.

Pg 18, LOVE the big make-y out-y shot with your DH. Make it bigger. Bottom right hand corner of pg 18, I'm not feeling it.

I like the feel and variety of content of the shots on pg 19 much much better than the ones on pg 20. 20 sort of falls flat due to the repetition - all smooching and we've already seen the mustaches.

Pg 21 and I am really glad to see the shots of the invitations - beautiful, for one, new subject matter very welcome by this point.

Pg 23-24, I adore that you got shots of so many VIPs walking to their seats, all beautiful shots!

Top right hand corner of pg 26, I don't like it. The photo beneath it is gorgeous and it shows that same moment. Can you find another shot of your DH waiting for you to put on the top half of the page? Or, can you use that same photo you have of him and simply not crop it the way it is there?

First pic on pg 27 is so similar to the shot I didn't like on the previous pg and it is much more flattering. Since you have this one in I would definitely cut that other one.

The big shot on pg 28 is nice in that you have some emotional guest reactions, but the biggest thing in that shot is your BM's bare arm. I would cut it for that reason.

Pg 29-30, love it. Hope the fold in the book doesn't eat the kiss part. Could you make it slightly off center for the book printing? I would much rather have some of the fireplace get eaten than your heads and your husband is already leaning towards your side anyway. Feels like a natural edit.

First shot on 33, can't tell what the blue stuff is, probably not big enough. Pg 34, your family shots are gorgeous. Love your cardigan.

Pg 43 - your father daughter dance with the big spinny skirt! Make it bigger!! Like the layout of the page with the cascading line between the photo edges. Use that layout for another page.

Bottom left hand corner of pg 44 - wtf? Is that the groom dancing with his mother? A little bizarre!

Pg 47-48 these pages are so busy, I really want some of them to be bigger. The eye needs some room to rest. I'm sure there are some details in there I would want to be able to see, also.

Pg 49-50 LOVE LOVE LOVE. Leave it. Great shot on 50 btw!!

Overall cute album! Your wedding was beautiful. I wish you would condense the first 20 pages. Those shots don't all need to be there, and the rest of the album is just so dense.

Every change you made was for the best IMO! It's looking really good! If you feel like changing anything else I think it's just minor tweaks for your own personal preference at this point. Really glad I could help! I loved looking at your album.