Help Proof Read my Program/Menu please!

posted 3 years ago in Food
Post # 2
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

Barbiestylez:  Parmesan is spelled incorrectly. The alignment of the bridal party names looks off but it could be because the last names are missing. Look good otherwise!

Post # 4
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

Barbiestylez:  I’ve always spelled it Parmesan and Google agrees. Parmigiano is another way to say it. But yeah, not Parmesean. 🙂

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2013

The spacing of the entrees is strange. It order to make it more clear that there are three different options, I think the spacing between the three options should be greater than the spacing between the lines of the third option. 

Also, I think “brides parents” and “grooms parents” should be either “bride’s parents” or “parents of the bride”. Same with “brides entrance”

Post # 7
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

Barbiestylez:  The restaurant is wrong. The spelling is parmesan.

Restauranteurs aren’t known for their great spelling skills. Have you seen all the spelling mistakes on menus?

Post # 9
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610 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2014 - Smithfield Center

Other than issues already stated, I think it’s a little hard to read the smaller script font – but it could just be me since no one else mentioned it.

Post # 10
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

To be honest, I think the font on the menu is hard to read, and tough when the same font is used on the program.  To me, it looks like it says “Cider of Events” instead of “order of events”

Agree with the parm talk – they spelled it wrong

Post # 12
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681 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

JiminyCricket:  LOL I read it as ‘Cider of Events’ too!

OP, ‘Brides/Grooms Parents’ should be ‘Bride’s/Groom’s Parents’…..the apostrophe is missing in your proofs.

Post # 13
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Busy bee

At least on my monitor, there isn’t enough contrast between the gold and the white background for that script font to be readable. The font needs to be a darker gold, I think. It might look different printed on whatever card stock you’re using though.

Post # 14
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

It’s hard to read the menu choices with that font choice.  Your wedding is so close though! So exciting!

Post # 15
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2012

Agreed that Parm is wrong having an e in it.

I don’t like how she lined up your programs and the attendants AT ALL.

And the font is a tad hard to read but it’s fine, it’s just a menu.

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