Help proof the invites before I order them?

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

@AllieLaLa:  The only thing I caught is my preference of a second comma (all the little details card):

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Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

@ebarnes0:  +1  I’m a fan of the oxford comma and would choose to use it rather than not.

Post # 6
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715 posts
Busy bee

@AllieLaLa:  I like the style, colours and fonts. 

I do find the directions (with all caps) a little hard to read. 

The all caps doesn’t bother me on the rest of the pages – but with the directions it does a little. (it’s a lot of info for the page – so there isn’t really a lot you can do… you can’t space it like on the details page…and i assume it would look weird to have that as the only not all-caps page…)

 

Post # 7
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10888 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

@AllieLaLa: Love the colours and fonts. Can I presume navy and pink will be your wedding colours?

Post # 8
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687 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2014

I second the directions comment – maybe do bullets and more spacing between the lines if you want to keep all caps? 

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