- 7 years ago
- Wedding: November 2011
I have my invitations already but I still need to DIY the accommodation cards. There are a few options online, but not all include all the information I need displayed… Could someone help me out? What I have so far is
For your convenience a block of rooms has been reserved at the xyz hotel. A special rate of $169.00 per night has been negotiated for our out of town guests for Saturday, November 26th and Sunday, November 27th. To reserve a room please go to http://www.hotelinnyc.com. If you plan to add on an additional day of either Friday, November 25th and/or Monday, November 28th please make your entire reservation directly through [email protected] and reference the xyz wedding. The rate will be honored for these dates as well. Please book by October 11th.
If you choose to fly with American Airlines or any of their partner airlines you will receive 5% off when using the promo code xyz123 for travel to NYC anytime between November 20th and December 4th.
Is this waaaaay too wordy? Is there any way to cut it down or make it sound more formal?
Thanks in advance
EDIT: Also the bride and groom will be staying elsewhere but there are no group rates there…. should I include that as well?