(Closed) help with he grammar please!

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bumble bee

It’s “the”, not he.

Kidding. Haha.

Use either the bride or the groom’s first and/or last name, or the wedding date, to locate the registry.

Post # 4
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2009

What are you trying to say? You’ll find the registry online by searching for the bride and grooms’ name?

I don’t mean that in a rude way, I know english isn’t your first language.

“the bride and groom are registered at ________”. Everyone knows to type in the bride or groom’s name and wedding date.

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2009

Try: The registry is listed under the bride or groom’s first and last name, with the wedding date.

Just so you know, most registries are fairly self explanatory about how to locate the registry.  🙂

Post # 8
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818 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2009

As long as it isn’t going on the invitation!

Post # 10
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2009

“located under the bride or grooms’ names, along with their wedding date” maybe? I think it’s awkward because it’s unnecessary.

Also, make sure it says “Desiree and eduardo are registered at”, not “register at”.

Post # 11
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

Your card sounds fine to me.  Although, on the first line, it should be “registered”.

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2010

Just one change: it should be “registered”: Desiree & Eduardo are registered at:

Otherwise, looks great!

Post # 13
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818 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2009

The wording is right.

Post # 15
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

Magenta,

 

No need to apologize at all!  Yea there are good guidelines/etiquette for Weddings, but it doesn’t mean they all have to be followed.  There really isn’t a wrong or right especially if the Wedding is personalized to you and your FI.  If adding that registry card in your invite is what will make you,FI,and your guest happy, then DO IT!  And be confident with your decisions!  I think your card looks great.

Post # 16
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: June 2010 - Ceremony - First United Methodist Church; Reception - My parents' house!

Is there a link to your specific registry? You could include that and just clear up some of the wording confusion?

 

Then again, it might be a crazy ugly and long link. Nm.

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