(Closed) Help me with my welcoming statement in ceremony program

posted 8 years ago in Ceremony
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

I think the sentiment of appreciation is very heartfelt and really sweet.  I would try to simplify, if it was my program.  Maybe something like this:

Friends and Family,

It means so much that you are here today to celebrate our marriage with us. Our marriage represents our unconditional love, endless commitment, and support for each other as we continue to better ourselves individually and as a new family or as husband and wife or as a couple.

Whether you travelled 10 miles or 1000, we are so grateful for your presence, love, and support. It means more to us than we can express.  We are lucky to have amazing people like you in our lives.

With our love and appreciation,

 

I changed some commas and whatnot, too.  Good luck, and have a wonderful wedding!  One month to go!

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