(Closed) Help with Wording on Wedding Invitations!!!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

If you’re not getting married in a church, the correct wording is “requests the pleasure of your company at their marriage.”

I think your wording is inclusive and gracious. Of course I’m biased since it’s the same wording on mine. 🙂 

Post # 8
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

Together with their families

Miss Precious Perfect and Mr. Rightly Awesome

request the pleasure of your company at their marriage

etc.

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

Our and their need to match. either “our families…our marriage” or “their families…their marriage”

Post # 10
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: June 2013 - Upstate NY

We didn’t spell anything British-sryle because we are not British

 

Together with their families

Miss Precious Perfect and Mr. Rightly Awesome

joyfully invite you to celebrate their wedding day

etc.

Post # 13
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

@blondiegirl:  Formal invitations are written in the third person. Informal invitations can be written in the first person. So it depends on how formal your wedding is.

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