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    Jizes318    November 19, 2010   Miami

    I am attempting to DIY my invitations from Michaels and I am at a loss with wording. We are paying for the wedding ourselves and I see most invitations have so and so request your presence at the marriage of their daughter etc... Also we are having limited seating so no plus ones unless they are married. Can anyone help me? I really am clueless on this. Thanks in advance if you can help!

     

    I want to add we have reserved one seat in your honour etc... May 22 2010, ceremony is at 4 reception to follow..

     

     

     
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    Jizes318    November 19, 2010   Miami

    Anyone?

     
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    Curlysue    June 5, 2009  

    Do you want any mention of parents/family on the invite?  Not names, but just to come celebrate with them too?  Reason I ask is although we are contributing, my parents are also.  We are doing:

    Please join us

    together with our parents

    for a celebration of love, friendship, laught and family

    as

    Curlysue

    and

    FI

    exchange vows and are united

    as husband and wife

    yadda, yadda, yadda...

     
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    rachel_leigh    May 15, 2010  

    I would do a search for "invite wording" and "couple hosting" and see what comes up.  You should find lots of examples that all cover the basic info with differences in formality and tone.  This is helpful for getting started and maybe even finding exactly what you want. 

    As for your seating issue, I know many people put this info on the rsvp card.  We did "___ seats have been reserved in your honor" so people knew how many were invited.

     
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    robinlinz    April 2011  

    There's really no need to clarify the no plus one thing on the invitation... The invitation should just be addressed to whomever the guest is... if you are allowing them to bring a guest, just write 'and guest' or 'and miss mary sue' on the envelope. If it doesn't say 'and guest' then the recipient should know they are not allowed a plus one.

    Here are a couple different wordings:

    The honor of your presence
    is requested at the marriage of

    BRIDE'S NAME
    to GROOM'S NAME

    Saturday, the twenty second of May
    two thousand and ten
    at half past four o'clock

    VENUE
    ADDRESS

    Reception to follow

    OR

    You are invited to a celebration
    of the beginning of our new life together

    as BRIDE
    and GROOM
    are united as husband and wife

    Saturday, the twenty second of May
    two thousand and ten
    at half past four o'clock

    VENUE
    ADDRESS

    Dinner and dancing to follow

     
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    sboston06    October 10, 2010   Boston area

    Our parents are helping but this would work for either...

     

    Together with their parents,

    bride

    and

    groom

    request the honor of your presence

    as they are united in marriage

    on Sunday, the Tenth of October

    Two Thousand Ten

    at time o'clock in the afternoon

     

    Location

    city, state

     
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    marlew    October 23, 2010   Ajax, Ontario

    with joyous hearts
    we invite you to attend
    the wedding of

    ME
    and
    HIM

    date, place, time.

    food and merriment to follow
    reception location
    time

    You are invited to a celebration
    of the beginning of our new life together
    as we are united as husband and wife
    on Saturday, the eleventh of September
    two thousand and four
    at six thirty in the evening
    (Address), Los Angeles, California

    Food, Wine and Merriment to immediately follow!

     

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    Please join us
    to share our joy and support our love
    As we exchange vows and are united
    in the commitment of marriage.

    Speeder Middle Last
    And
    Munkey Middle Hislast

    Saturday the twelfth of March
    at Half past five o'clock

    The Naples Room
    Milwaukee

    Dinner and Dancing to Follow

     

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    Because your love and friendship
    have guided and inspired us,
    we invite you to join us as we exchange
    our wedding vows.

    FireDragon
    and
    FireRam

    Sunday, the eighteenth of September,
    two-thousand and five
    four o'clock in the afternoon

    amidst the sequoias
    at The Beautiful State Park in
    My Hometown, California

    reception and rock 'n' roll to follow

     

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    Ms. Crazydoglady
    and
    Mr. Crazydoglady

    Because your love and friendship
    have helped us become who we are,
    we joyfully invite you to share in our
    celebration of love and commitment

    Together we laugh, we dream, we love,
    and on this day, we marry

    Friday, the fourth of November
    Two Thousand and Five
    Eight o’clock in the evening
    Cool place
    Blue county, Red State

    Dessert reception immediately following

     

    (source: http://offbeatbride.com/2007/12/wedding-invitation-wording-that-wont-make-you-barf)

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    We joyfully invite you to our wedding celebration.
    On this day we will marry the one
    we laugh with, live for, dream with, love.

    Please join
    Feline
    and
    Canine
    at Time
    on Date
    Two thousand and four

    Place

    Buffet dinner and dancing to follow.

     

     

     
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    Champagne Wishes    May 22, 2010   Upstate New York

    We did this...

    Together with their parents

    SEA

    and

    GES III

    request the honor of your presence at their marriage

    Saturday, the twenty-second of May

    Two Thousand ten

    at two o'clock in the afternoon

    St. Pat's Church

    Street, State

    Then on a seperate enclosure card, we wrote:

    Join Us (in a script font)

    For an Adult Reception

    Cocktails. Dinner. Dancing.

    Six o'clock in the evening

    Country Club of the Universe

    Address

     
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    Jizes318    November 19, 2010   Miami

    WOW! Thank you sooooooo much! I have been searching online etc alot. Like to the point my eyes were hurting. I have never even been to a wedding much less seen an invitation. Im having a tough enough time planning my own!! LOL This really helps!

     

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