(Closed) How do you feel about this wedding reading?

posted 6 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
Member
94 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

I think it is adorable, and I think it is the perfect length. DO IT!

Post # 4
Member
3697 posts
Sugar bee

I wouldn’t use this for a wedding. Different strokes for different folks, if you love it go with it, but I would reject it on the following grounds:

– the first part seems frivolous. Some cutting might help, but, still, it feels more trivial than I would want for a wedding.

– “But we can also ask for something we are much more likely to get,” sounds a little bit entitled to me

“to find a person or two” — not for a wedding. I’d want something clearly and exclusively focused on finding and committing to a single partner.

— “You are noble enough.” – not really the sentiment I’d be aiming for.

Again, pick it if you love it. Just my $0.02

Post # 6
Member
1269 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I like it. Thin it out by removing one or two “we can ask fors” if you think it’s too long.

Post # 7
Member
6256 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: March 2014

I think it’s a little overly twee, personally. Maybe if you shortened/tooled it? 

Post # 8
Member
133 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

I like it.  I think it’d be fine to edit it to get it just how you’d like it.  Very sweet.

Post # 9
Member
257 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: February 2013

I love it 🙂

But then I’m a big geek too and want to have a Dr Seuss reading at my wedding.

The topic ‘How do you feel about this wedding reading?’ is closed to new replies.

Find Amazing Vendors