(Closed) How does my Menu Look?

posted 8 years ago in Food
Post # 3
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Buzzing bee

Are you asking about food choices or about design?

Post # 4
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2012

is the roasted potatoes an entree option or a side?

Post # 5
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: February 2011

You spelled caesar wrong 🙂 Also under penne I’d say “with tomato sauce, sauteed mushrooms, and spinach” … too many connectors imo. 

I would also add a comma after “cracked pepper” because I’m a firm believer in the oxford comma, but thats a personal choice. 

Lastly, it dessert has two s’s… the one you used means “to abandon” and it looks like its a different side than “option” which would probably be “options” 

 

Other than that, looks great though– and yum!!

Post # 8
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Buzzing bee

Ok, so I don’t mean to be rude at all but maybe my computer isn’t showing the menu right.  All I see are regular times new roman and ariel lettering in black red and green.  There aren’t a lot of design elements on this.  Let me know if this is supposed to be this way and forgive me for my critique.

Post # 9
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Buzzing bee

sorry for double post

Post # 10
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2012

i might change the red…it almost makes it look like a separate selection…maybe just parentheses for the description in black? 

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: April 2011

I would move the descriptions of the penne, pork, and potatoes up so that it’s right underneath instead of having a space in between.  I think I would italicize the descriptions and keep them black.

Is there a reason why the font size is larger for the word “Option” under the desserts?

Personally, I would play with the fonts a bit more.  Maybe use a script font for the Buffet Menu title and headers.  Are you using a monogram?  If so, it would look great at either the top or bottom of the menu!  Just my 2 cents!  The meal sounds yummy! 🙂

Post # 12
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Sugar bee

@mishelleez:Right under Roasted Potatoes, With Oregano.  Do you want Oregano captalized?

Btw, YUM!  Super hungry right now.

Post # 13
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Newbee

Your food choices look great.  This is a minor comment, but it’s actually “demi-glace” with a C, not a Z. 

Post # 14
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2012

i agree with the font.  what kind of look are you going for?  maybe we could help you find a cool one! 

Post # 16
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: December 2011

I’d say don’t capitalize “oregano” in addition to the other minor corrections here…also, is “option” in “dessert option” supposed to be a larger size font? It looks funny to me–maybe just my monitor though?

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