(Closed) How does my RSVP look…

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Hostess
18646 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2009

So people can come to one (ceremony or reception) and not the other?

Post # 4
Member
1580 posts
Bumble bee

“Can’t beliebe they can’t make it!” should be in the first person, like “Can’t believe we can’t make it”

Are you asking a question in the top line? If so, I’d add a question mark. “Ready to celebrate? Let us know by”

Do you need to ask about food preferences?

Have you printed out a sample to make sure there is enough room on the line to write the names? It is a pet peeve of mine when the lines aren’t long enough.

Post # 5
Member
350 posts
Helper bee

Looks great!  Just some minor grammatical errors.  I’d probably change to:

Ready to celebrate? Let us know by: (add the question mark instead of comma)

and change “Can’t believe they can’t make it!” to “Can’t believe we can’t make it!”

I am confused about the dancing shoes thing?  Is that a cute way of saying that they won’t be able to come to the reception or that they have to choose if they will be dancing or not?

Post # 6
Member
350 posts
Helper bee

LOL @ Jacqi we had the same comments!

Post # 7
Member
129 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

Instead of “Can’t believe they can’t make it!” how about “Sorry we can’t make it!” So you don’t repeat “can’t” twice and you have the phrase in the 1st person. Or if you want to keep it in line with the “Can’t wait” from above, how about just “Can’t make it”.

Post # 8
Member
1580 posts
Bumble bee

I like Albee’s idea of just saying “Can’t make it.”

Also, you have an extra space between Reception and the options, but not under Ceremony.

Post # 10
Member
7779 posts
Bumble Beekeeper

I don’t think you need to add the extra “wont be able to make it” under the “stuck in the closet” part. It’s kind of redundant.

Other than that, I like!

Post # 11
Member
696 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: January 2010

delete won’t be able to make it…what stock are you printing it on?

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