(Closed) How to word sign for our bar

posted 7 years ago in Reception
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

I would delete the ‘draws of’ term, but the rest sounds good. Just leave it at that.

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

I think saying “on us” twice is a little redundant. I would just say your phrase and then list everythig out:

This Round’s On Us!

Bud Light

Miller Light

Pop

Coffee 

Iced Tea

Lemonade

 

Wait . . . all of a sudden I’m confused. Are you making them pay for coffee, etc.?

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I think babylou is on the right path, just keep it simple so it’s more of a quick list to glance and not a paragraph for them to stand there and read. (not that I’m saying you have a paragraph going, but I would eliminate sentences)

Post # 6
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Blushing bee

I agree, a list is easier to read.  I would also maybe change “pop” to either “Coke Products” or “Pepsi Products” (whichever your venue carries), or just say “soft drinks.”  (sounds more formal than “pop”)

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