(Closed) I know it's kind if weird to ask but can you critique my vows?

posted 5 years ago in Military
Post # 3
3429 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

@imanw:  They are beautiful:) I find nothing to change. 

Post # 4
175 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

Beautiful. Genuine, personal, emotional, heartfelt… Perfect. Absolutely perfect. 🙂

Post # 5
9917 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

They’re really long.  You might want to try to condense them a bit.

Post # 6
1358 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

Love it! I can tell you really poured your heart into these and the result is sweet, personal, and tugs at my heartstrings. The one thing I would maybe suggest tweaking is the line “threw my parameters to the wind.” Although it makes sense to look for certin qualities in a life partner, “list of parameters” sounds a little impersonal.

Maybe instead say “I threw my prayer to the wind for a man who is

    , and who would bring happiness and joy into my life.”

Post # 7
1465 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

Your vows are wonderful and I dont think you need to add anything more just make sure you edit and check the spelling. They are heartfelt and funny which is a representation of your relationship.


Post # 8
293 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2013

@imanw:  I think they are beautiful! The only thing that I would change is “always be a razorback fan unless they play the cowboys.” you must ALWAYS be a razorback fan, especially when they play OU or OSU!!!! 😛 WOO PIG SOOIE!!!




j/k! They truly are beautiful! Congratulations on the upcoming marriage!


 ETA: My vows include a part where I promise to always teach our children to “Call the Hogs” I’m very excited to find a fellow Hogs fan, even if you like Oklahoma as well. 🙂


Post # 9
543 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

@niasg1:   why would should need to spellcheck? She’s the only one reading her vows, its not like she’s publishing them lol.


OP very sweet and heartfelt vows!

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