I need a wordsmith!

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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132 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2015

Join us on our journey as we make new memories…

Join us for a photo tour of the city..

 

 

Just off the top of my head.. I’m no wordsmith!

Post # 4
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493 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: March 2014

@salejolie:  I would put something like “After the wedding, guests are welcome to see some of the sights of the city with {guide or company name} via {shuttle bus, trolley, motorcoach, carriage, whatever} en route to {reception venue}. Dinner and dancing to follow at 7 o’clock.”

Post # 5
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268 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

Please join us for a complimentary guided tour around the city of __________ immediately following the ceremony (transportation provided), followed by dinner and dancing at……  

Post # 7
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42460 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

@salejolie:  I would use stephanie1989’s wording. The wording should comminicate what is being offered. Getting cutesy may not accomplish that.

 

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