(Closed) Invitation feedback! Also, Johnny Cash lovin’ Bees…

posted 6 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Is it accurate?
    Lyrics are good to go! : (7 votes)
    41 %
    Nope- your sources are wrong. Corrections below : (0 votes)
    Comma : (0 votes)
    No Comma : (2 votes)
    12 %
    The invitations look great, I see no flaws/errors! : (6 votes)
    35 %
    Your invitations suck. Start over. : (2 votes)
    12 %
  • Post # 3
    Member
    1572 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: October 2009

    One of my favourite songs ever. I like your invites! Congrats 🙂 

    Post # 4
    Member
    6065 posts
    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: January 2012

    I like the addition of the Johnny Cash lyric. 🙂 It makes it unique, and its meaningful if you and your FI love Johnny Cash. (I do!)

    What are the colors of your wedding? Do your invite colors match the colors of your wedding?

     

    I’m not sure I love the graphics on the sides..

    Post # 5
    Member
    1465 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: October 2012

    The lyrics are accurate, no comma needed. Cute idea btw. They look great.

    Post # 6
    Member
    1014 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: May 2011

    I like the johnny cash lyrics. I think the rest of the invite wording needs to be tweaked, though. I’d omit the festivities to follow line because it’s redundant when you put dinner, dancing, etc … right after. The first comes love line also seems awkward when followed by the come celebrate line after. I like the design, though, and I think the lyric is definitely cool. Just not feeling the rest of the text, just comes off sloppy to me.

    Post # 10
    Member
    267 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: September 2012

    I think you need something to tie all the text together. I like the Johnny Cash lyrics, and I don’t mind the “first comes love” line OR the “come celebrate with us” line, but it looks like they belong on different invitations. Is there a more Cash-ish way to say “tie the knot?”

    For you I know I’d even try to turn the tide

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    and

    Groomy Groom

    Come celebrate with us as we fall into a burning ring of fire!

    Yeah…maybe you’d better stick with “tie the knot.” Love the concept though!!

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