Invitation proof: What am I missing? Anything you would change?

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2014 - Prague

Yay to the border. I think that would be excellent. I think putting the website NOT on the rsvp card is better, since they will be sending you back that card and should have the website handy, right?

Non-mean confusion: I don’t get the “We mustache you…” 🙁 I’m feeling a bit dense, but I don’t see the reference, other than to the pics of mustaches.

Other than that…. I might copy your wording! I’ve been looking for something that doesn’t refer to parents.

Very CUTE!

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2014

I like the idea of the border – it does look a little plain so that could spice it up. 

Post # 5
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Busy bee

@jwdesiree:  I also like the idea with the border.

Post # 7
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2013

that’s cute and creative and it should reflect you and your FI… so good for you… I agree, a border would definitely make it pop more.  As far as your website, I put that information on an extra insert which had the directions on it rather than the RSVP card. 

Kudos for you for keeping money in your pocket anytime you can because the whole wedding thing is a big money making racket.

 

Post # 9
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: October 2014

@jwdesiree:  maybe you can add a logo or your monograms on top? 

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

@creeative1:  this!

OP – It looks great, the only thing I’m wondering is if the “Two” should be capitalized? Perhaps some other bees can chime in on this because I’m not quite sure. It just seems that then the “twelfth” should be capitalized? Maybe not, I could be totally off, just wanted to bring it up just in case though!

 

Post # 12
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: October 2015

@jwdesiree:  I realize the lips & moustache are supposed to just be images flanking the “and” but to me it reads as

“Miss Mary Poppins

Lips and Moustache

Mr. Rhett Butler”

Which doesn’t make any sense! I would move the lips & moustache (and maybe make them smaller) to the top of the page and add some kind of flourishes to either side of the and instead. 

Post # 14
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2014

@jwdesiree:  That’s what I was thinking too…I’m thinking I would probably do all the numbers (date, year, and time) in lower case to give it a more consistent look overall for that block. Alternatively, you could go all upper case, but that doesn’t seem to fit with the style of your invites as much. I vote all lower (except for “April”)! 🙂

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