(Closed) Invitation wording

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
6998 posts
Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: February 2011

I think that is worded perfectly for your unique situation. It flows really nicely.

Post # 4
4512 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: September 2010

I like it, but I worry that your dad’s 2nd wife is excluded? Can you say the “families” of xxxx?

Small points — there are a couple of typos (nuptial, sacrament), and I”d double-check the capitalization (why capitalize “At” when you aren’t capitalizing the beginning words in the other lines, etc.). 

Post # 7
5075 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: October 2012

@moose91:   you will always be their “children”, regardless of your age.  Wink

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