(Closed) Invitation Wording

posted 5 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Which invitation wording do you prefer?
    ....invite you to share in the joy on their wedding day : (5 votes)
    63 %
    ...request the pleasure of your company to the celebration of their marriage : (3 votes)
    38 %
    I have a better idea! : (0 votes)
  • Post # 3
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    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    First one is more appropriate for your plans I think, less formal. I think I would say: ….invite you to share in the joy of their wedding day. Something about the other sentence strikes me weird when I read it, like it studders on the “on” if that makes sense?

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