(Closed) Invitation Wording Help

posted 5 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Do you like the wording for my invites and RSVPs?
    Both look good : (1 votes)
    50 %
    Invite looks good, but RSVP needs changes : (0 votes)
    RSVP looks good, but invite needs changes : (1 votes)
    50 %
    Both need some work... : (0 votes)
  • Post # 3
    9917 posts
    Buzzing Beekeeper
    • Wedding: June 2013

    @mmwar:  I would make these very minor changes:

    Together with their families

    Bride name & Groom name

    Invite you to celebrate

    The beginning of their new life together

    Saturday the Sixth of April

    Two Thousand Thirteen

    Five O’clock in the evening

    Country Club XX

    Reception to follow (or “dinner & dancing to follow”)


    Ours say “request the pleasure of your company at the celebration of their marriage”…and now i am wondering if that is weird.  Your wording and mine both don’t explicitly say that there is a wedding taking place…lol.


    Post # 4
    1306 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: August 2012

    I feel that your invitations are formal, which is good. Personally, I don’t like the “new life” line as you two already have established a life together. I would consider somethingmore like this:

    Bride name & Groom name

    invite you to celebrate with them

    as they exchange wedding/marriage vows

    on Saturday the sixth of April….


    and then i would use “dinner and dancing to follow”

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