Invitation wording help!

posted 3 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I think it’s a little awkward to go from “together with their families” to requesting presence.  My preference would be:

 

Together with their families

Bride’s name

and

Groom’s name

Request the honor of your presence 

at their marriage

 

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