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posted 2 months ago in Beehive

My family is so far not going to be involved in my wedding and neither is his.  I have a pre-teen daughter from a previous marriage and am trying to have her feel as included as we can in this whole new life we are creating.

Any thoughts on how to word the invites?  Even if my family does come around and "give their blessing" I still don't want it to be about them but about us and the creation of the new family.

I haven't seen much that doesn't sound lame or overly sappy.

Any thoughts or sites??

posted by thefuturemrsjohnson 22 posts 2 months ago

  You could do something like

<font><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica" size="1" color="#000000">Because you have shared in our lives
by your friendship and love, we
your name and
his name together with our daugherinvite you to share
the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows</font></font>

 

                        Your Name

                            and

                         His Name

                    Invite you to share

                   in the celebration of 

                 Our Marriage and the Uniting

                         Of our family. 

posted by maureen9004 261 posts 2 months ago

Yes I agree with Maureen, that is perfect 

posted by Hyacinth 33 posts 2 months ago

I like Maureen's as well.

We didn't use our parents names (even though mine are paying, but we didn't want it to sound too formal) and instead used: "Bride & Groom invite you to share in our happiness as we join hands in marriage".

posted by MsB 212 posts 2 months ago

I've actually seen it done where the invitation is sent "from" the daughter. It would say something like

daughtersname requests the honor of your presence at the union of yourname and yourFIsname (you can also use mother and father if that's what she calls him or mother and father #2 or some other cute title for him)

Good luck!

posted by bonniebelle101 291 posts 2 months ago

Because you have shared in our lives
by your friendship and love, we
your name and
his name together with our daugherinvite you to share
the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows

 

I love this one from Maureen

posted by Bridemarie 39 posts 2 months ago

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