(Closed) Invitation wording – outdoor ceremony

posted 8 years ago in Etiquette
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

If you don’t like all the ‘ats’ you really don’t need them before the time and you can also say IN the garden of…like this…also, i don’t think you would said at the marriage of, but rather the wedding of, since the marriage is the result of the wedding

The pleasure of your company is requested

at the wedding uniting  Jack and Jill

on Sunday the 22nd of August 2010

Five in the afternoon

In the wedding garden of the Old Mill Inn…

 

 

 

Post # 5
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Newbee
  • Wedding: July 2010

you could also say:

the pleasure of your company is requested for the wedding of jack and jill,

please join us suday …..

at 5:00

in the wedding garden of…

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: January 2009

Sounds good!  The only thing I’d recommend is having “two thousand ten”, taking out the “and”.  “And” is used to indicate a decimal point (Seriously though, not many people will notice this, I’m a neurotic teacher!)  Smile

Post # 9
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

One last nitpicky point 🙂

I think the date should have a hyphen: twenty-second

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

it should be two thousand ten, with no “and”

Post # 12
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

I think that you could take out the “at” before “reception to follow at (room name)”.

If the reception is at the same location, you could just say “Reception to follow”.

🙂 

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