Post # 1
I’ve been trying to get the wording just right all morning.. but I’m just still not sure about this. What do you think, does this sound okay, or would you change something? Thanks for your help!!
It is with joy that we
invite you to share
in our celebration of love, family, and friendship
as we exchange marriage vows
Post # 3
I like it! Short, sweet, and to the point. I would do the last part as one cohesive sentence, though. The breaks make it read a little awkwardly.
Post # 4
I like the “love, family, and friendship” bit.
Post # 5
Thanks for the feedback. So I’ve changed the lines a little.. do you think it needs another comma somewhere?
invite you to share in our
celebration of love, family, and
friendship as we exchange
Post # 6
@awoah82: it’s nice but i think it should be ‘with great joy’ or something, because ‘with joy’ sounds wrong.