(Closed) invite “draft”

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
58 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

Pretty! I would change the wording a little,eliminate teh commas and list the town/state of the reception for any Out of Town (unless you’re including a reception card)



the twenty fifth of June

Two Thousand Ten

four o’clock

Blue Falls Grove

X Town, Y State

Post # 6
7054 posts
Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: July 2010

I’d for sure check out some of the invitation sites and look at their wording for the invitations!

I like the starfish!

Post # 7
5985 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2010

cool! i think you should consider clovers suggestions πŸ˜€

Post # 8
1982 posts
Buzzing bee

I like Clover’s suggestions. I also think you should try maybe another font for your smaller text? It is a little hard to read at the top.

I love that you’re doing it so inexpensively, congrats to you!

Post # 9
3344 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

I think it looks odd having the text not justified or centered.  Try setting the text on the bottom have to right justify.

Post # 10
3539 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

twenty eleven is definitely differant wording for the year..

Have you ever thought of doing them yourself? Because the idea you have is really simple and definitely a very cool DIY job.  I think you should also have your name in some fancy print, so it stands out a little more and I agree with jojo about the centering (sp?). πŸ™‚

Post # 11
3252 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

Yea I would definitely check out the wording issues and the text alignment but this is a great start. Keep up the good work.

Post # 12
312 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

tarahartman– are these the ones your ended up ordering? Super cute.. and even better that they are inexpensive..I love a good deal!! πŸ™‚

Post # 13
3125 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: December 2009

I would work on the text and layout of the letters.. i like the overall design, though! One thing i’d suggest is ordering a sample before you order all 240. Snapfish isn’t a bad printer, but they’re not going to do the same kind of job as a local printer, you know? The quality might not come through.

Post # 14
1465 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

Pretty! The only thing I would change is doing right justification for the date/time text at the bottom. Otherwise everything looks great.

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