(Closed) Invite-First Draft

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: December 2012

I love it! I really like the colors too! 🙂

Post # 4
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9552 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013

Love it! Love the different fonts. Will your guests know you by first name only?

Post # 5
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

For the most part, I really like it.  I think there are too many different fonts on there, though.  The colors are fantastic, and I think the silver line will be great!

Post # 6
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2010

I like it a lot, I would just use fewer fonts. You have 10 fonts on there, I would maybe take it down to 5 or 7 and re-use a couple to make it more cohesive rather than every line being a new font.

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2008

I agree with PPs who say there are a few too many fonts.  I think the design and the wording are great! I think paring down the different fonts will make it look more professional (assuming you want your DIYinvites to look as though they were done professionally) and put-together. 

Post # 9
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4940 posts
Honey bee

Perhaps think about adding your last names? I definitely agree with less fonts. The line “at their wedding ceremony and reception” is kind of throwing me off. I’m not sure what I think it should be, I just think it could be worded differently. I would perhaps add an ending time? I know it says celebrate new years eve but does that include ringing in the new year? Just a few thoughts. I really do like them though!

ETA: One more thought; for myself, I usually just thow away the envelope right away, so I wouldn’t even think about looking for names on the envelope.

Post # 14
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Newbee
  • Wedding: September 2012

 I do a lot of freelance design, and I always use the rule: 3 fonts is the max!

I would use One sans-serif, one-serif and one script! 

(my favs: the font for “WEDDING” && the font for the date)

but overall, the colors, the theme looks awesome! 🙂 

 

*******Now that I see your changes: I’d leave your names in the serif block, but still apply the all serifs using the same, all sans using the same font

Post # 15
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2010

@BrookieCookie9:  Definitely liking it! Maybe play around with the font you used for the date though? It feels a bit out of place to me. I love the rest though!

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