Post # 1
Together With Their Families
Request the honor of your presence
As they are joined together in marriage
On Saturday, the fourteenth of May
Two thousand eleven
At two o’clock in the afternoon
Most Precious Blood Church
Fort Wayne, Indiana
what do you think bees?
Post # 3
The only thing I don’t like is the “as they are joined together in marriage”.. it’s a little too wordy for me. I would just say “request the honor of your presence at their marriage”.
Also.. make sure you include the actualy address of the church. I’m guessing you just pulled it off for privacy reasons on the website but I wanted to make sure.
Post # 4
I like it as is! but I agree with PP be sure to put the address if you didnt already plan on it