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Invite... wording .....help!!?!??!?!

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    Baby_PebbleS    October 10, 2010   Brisbane, Australia

    ok so most who have read my post about what i'm doing on my wedding day... who those who don't

    http://boards.weddingbee.com/topic/secret-wedding-shhhh

    so i know what i'm going to write on the card thingy that i will send to everyone that won't be at the party when we tell everyone that we got married that morning....For the invitation that i will have to send out to everyone so that they actually come that night i'm a bit stuck.... as i don't really want to give anything away LOL but i'm sure everyone isn't stupid as we annonced at out engagement party that we decided the date was going to be 10/10/10... so i'm sure most will think they are being invite to a wedding... even though the time will be 5pm LOL so what i have at the moment to put on the invitation is

    Once upon a time
    in a faraway land
    a princess had all her
    dreams come true
    when a charming prince
    asked for her hand in marriage.
    Their fairytale begins with
    "I do"...

    and then i don't know maybe putting Time, Date and place after that and nothing else.... oh signed by me and craig (just incase they have no idea who it's from) BUT i don't know.... i need helpo!!! I really like that little poem thing as it hints that it's about the wedding but to me its already saying that we've already said our I do's... but i'm thinking others won't think that so then they won't know that we already have.... AND i'm thinking i might wait until closer to the date to send family members (like mum ) the invite otherwise she will be asking whats happening LOL not that she already isn't.

     
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    Baby_PebbleS    October 10, 2010   Brisbane, Australia

    Tongue outBUMP

     
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    Baby_PebbleS    October 10, 2010   Brisbane, Australia

    tricky one isn't it! HAHAHAHAHA

     
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    LpCutiPie    July 3, 2010   Central Florida

    Personally I think that gives it away.. What about inviting your guests to a different type of party.. Maybe a early halloween party with a "fairytale theme" or something like that. You may even want to consider something like well even though the wedding isn't happening we're throwing a party. Please join us in celebrating the great things in life such as love, family, and friends. I honestly don't know that either of these are suggestions you're looking for but I do think the previous wording gives it away..

     
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    ccranetobe    August 14, 2010   Albany, Western Australia

    an example I got off the net (however I would make the wording a little more informal)

    Kristen Russell and James Sabino
    will be married on the seventeenth of August
    at a private beach ceremony
    in Key West, Florida
    You are cordially invited
    to join us upon our return for a
    Caribbean-Style Wedding Celebration on Sunday, the twenty-fifth of August
    two thousand and nine
    at two o’clock
    The Gazebo at The Waters Inn
    Quincy, Massachusetts
    Caribbean Casual Attire
    Regrets only: (330) 606-8274
    by August 10th

     

    Just like a page out of a fairy tale
    the storybook romance comes true . . .
    Angelique Renee Edwards
    and
    James Griffith Anthony
    invite you to share in the joy
    as they will exchanged wedding vows the morning of

    and would like you to attend the reception at
    on Saturday, the fourth of August
    two thousand and nine
    at four o'clock
    St. Timothy's Church

     

    Its a tough one - I know thats not exactly giving you what you wanted, but its a start?

     
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    Baby_PebbleS    October 10, 2010   Brisbane, Australia

    Thanks... i think i really need to think this one through....... ARGH! LOL

     
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    ccranetobe    August 14, 2010   Albany, Western Australia

    I dont really think you should keep it a suprise? unless your having it really small. I honestly think its polite to announce that you chose to have a private ceromony. But it would make a great party!!

    I have been to a wedding were we got invited to their engagement party and they were very definite about the time of - no later.

    We arrived and the girl wasnt there... They then announce that this was actually their wedding!! and would you all stand for the arrival of the bride!

    It was absolutely awseome! So suprises are great! But yeah.. I would be shot if I did this for our wedding. So good luck it is definitely a tough one and I wish you all best with the wording!

     
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    Baby_PebbleS    October 10, 2010   Brisbane, Australia

    Yeah well after all the drama that i had with my past 2 lots of plannings... the only people that will be there when we get married is my brother and my SO brother and my 2 step kids and the photographer :)

    so yeah we're having it REALLY small lol.
    and there will only be like 20people coming to the party that night anyway... then i'll be sending out annoucements to everyone that we are married (not including the people that were at the party but family that are overseas and wouldn't be able to make it..... not that i would invite them because it's not a wedding and just drinks and nibbles, so no point in them spending a few hundred for that lol)

     

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