(Closed) ***Invite wording Proof me please

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

I would get rid of the dirty jokes part…

Post # 4
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: November 2011

I wouldn’t necessarily infer that “on the grounds of” would mean outside.

Post # 7
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

@sunnywoods:  Okay…I just think anyone over the age of maybe 30 would be like, what?

 

I also think you should write something like, “Outdoors at Greenwood House” instead of “On the grounds”…you want them to know for sure it’s outside, right?

Post # 8
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2013

I think it’s cute.  ๐Ÿ™‚  (and I’m way over 30….I”m not even sure what was meant by that comment …as if anyone over 30 has no sense of humor, or isn’t in touch enough anymore to get it???) ๐Ÿ™

Post # 10
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2013

@sunnywoods:  then it’s perfect! I actually thought about doing something similar! 

 

Post # 11
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2013

I think “dirty jokes” is a little crass for some people.  I guess it’s not about age.

Post # 13
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2012

My only thought us about “me and him”. Kind of makes it sound like you’re the hostess by yourself? Not sure what else to put Though… Could do him and her but normally the female is listed first. Also agree to say outdoors instead of the grounds of. Or maybe on the lawn of or something 

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